this is my inside out of the man in the story.
Thursday, 19 August 2021
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Hi Imogen, well done on completing your reading work for the day. I appreciate how you tried to make your own Mr Morris Lessmore, rather than finding a google image. Next time think about the choice of descriptive words you use, how could you vary them?
ReplyDeleteHi Miss Hart, Next time I make a inside out I will make it more Exiting or like more descriptive, like my dad told me he said Maby Surprised could be shocked or helps could be useful.
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